I Want You In My Life (The Rime Royal Sonnet)

July 16, 2009, 12:03 am

I Want You In My Life (The Rime Royal Sonnet) The moon is bright it casts its shadows far I take your hand to me with in my heart Surrounded by a million twinkling stars Romancing you I find is a true...

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July 16, 2009, 7:16 am

~ sighhhhhh....this is so beautifully tender, and romantic, dear Bill and what woman wouldn't want these words from her man? a beautifully crafted Rime Royal Sonnet, hon...I'll have to try this form...

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Re: I Want You In My Life (The Rime Royal Sonnet)

July 16, 2009, 10:15 am

Wow, this sonnet form sounds daunting, if it's anything like the Rime Royale form, yet you breezed through it like a hot knife through butter... yeah... it's like "buttah, dahling! *wink* Always enjoy...

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Re: I Want You In My Life (The Rime Royal Sonnet)

July 16, 2009, 2:37 pm

Angel of Shadow wrote: ~ sighhhhhh....this is so beautifully tender, and romantic, dear Bill and what woman wouldn't want these words from her man? a beautifully crafted Rime Royal Sonnet, hon...I'll...

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Re: I Want You In My Life (The Rime Royal Sonnet)

July 16, 2009, 2:41 pm

Ravenne wrote: Wow, this sonnet form sounds daunting, if it's anything like the Rime Royale form, yet you breezed through it like a hot knife through butter... yeah... it's like "buttah, dahling!...

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Re: I Want You In My Life (The Rime Royal Sonnet)

July 16, 2009, 6:08 pm

Bill, Mr. Romance has struck again. I never tire of these writes my friend...it just tells me what kind of person you are and I respect that.

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July 16, 2009, 8:35 pm

willowandrye wrote: Bill, Mr. Romance has struck again. I never tire of these writes my friend...it just tells me what kind of person you are and I respect that. Humm, do I detect a bit of ominousness...

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Re: I Want You In My Life (The Rime Royal Sonnet)

July 17, 2009, 1:31 pm

Some lucky lady would love this Bill A perfect sonnet

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Re: I Want You In My Life (The Rime Royal Sonnet)

July 17, 2009, 6:27 pm

A perfectly executed rime royal sonnet. Such a form isn't as easy as it seems but you make it work exceedingly. Excellent! Shadow Poet

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July 17, 2009, 6:41 pm

cusick wrote: Some lucky lady would love this Bill A perfect sonnet My Dear Maggie...you are so sweet to my efforts...Thank you

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Re: I Want You In My Life (The Rime Royal Sonnet)

July 17, 2009, 6:43 pm

shadowpoet wrote: A perfectly executed rime royal sonnet. Such a form isn't as easy as it seems but you make it work exceedingly. Excellent! Shadow Poet Thank you sir for your positive comments...They...

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